The Internet without dude is one of the most important inventions in Modern Life, maybe the one that most changed our life style.
The Information really changed in a positive way thanks to the Internet. You can be informed about the entire world only with some clicks, read newspapers from countries that perhaps you never heard about and also see their television channels. Does not matter where you are, if you have a computer an Internet connection you can know everything important that happened in your country.
Entertainment is other of the good points of the Internet, you can pass hours and hours explore the web and do not feel boring. On-line games, music, videos and all that you can imagine is certainly exist inside this virtual world. However, we need to be carefully and not become addicted to it because this is already one problem in the modern society.
I consider that other two important facilities of the Internet are the e-mail and e-business. E-mail is faster and cheaper than regular Post Office mail, so inevitably became the most popular way to communicate with family or friends; therefore the number of users logging continues rising. Then, we have the giant e-business, which became more and more popular around the world; clothes, books, cd’s, cosmetics, food, and much more is ready to buy in the Internet. For convenience and some times price shopping on-line is the option that a lot of people choose every day.
In conclusion, I think that the invention of the Internet makes our lives easier in different ways and is already part of our lives, from now we can enjoy the advantages that the Internet offer to us without became addict to it!
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This article gives me the clear main reason.
However, I feel some confuse in the first and second paragraph. I suggest that you can correct some grammer mistakes just like: "..., if you have a computer an Internet connection you ...". Moreover, there is a word called "dude". Although I check the Internet dictionary, I have not known what it is. Maybe you can use another common word to write.
These are my suggestion.
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Enjoy to read your paragraph.~
A rich description of the advantages of the Internet such as you can get the information easily, playing on-line games, listening music, watching videos, e-mail and e-business.
There are one suggestion for you, the disadvantage about enterainment maybe you can try to talk more supports make balance between advantage and disadvatage or just talk about advantage.
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