After I graduated from high school in Paraguay, the country from where I come from, I remember the big problem in which I was involved in, in that moment I really wasn’t sure about the career that I wanted to choose, so I started to search a lot of information about careers and universities and two months later my decision was made: my mayor will be Computer Science and Information Engineering.
At that moment I could not imagine that one year and a half later I would choose the same one more time but this time…far, far away from home.
Computer Science and Information Engineering is the mayor that I chose two times for reasons that are related with the actual situation of my country. In
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It's a good article for me to understand your reason.
I think you can add a clear topic sentence in your first paragraph.Then, maybe you can let first and second paragraph merge to one paragraph because the second is too short.
This is my suggestions.I hope that they could help you. :)
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